hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,594 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Known Deception - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Look at no smiling faces
That shall remind of new race
The class of its own
Who have happiness flown?

They have an art of contentment
Internal happiness with movement
That reflects on face
You find only some traces

Go after poor living in hut
You will find more happiness but
He will reveal only his part
His world loves with speed of cart

Do not go after comparison
It may have no reasons
You confined to what you are
The people may leave you and go far

People may be living with deception
This quality develops since inception
You just follow what your instinct says
That shall suggest you means and ways


Comments about With Known Deception by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Interesting, a race of unsmiling faces developed from inception.
    18 Aug by South by Southwest to With known deception (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    Nice


    Dieter Clotman3 hours ago
    Not the easiest one to read, but beautifully done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,594 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    Look at no smiling faces
    That shall remind of new race (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 18, 2014



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