hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With Known Race - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Each soul
Responds to call
Whether it is earthly
Or heavenly

We run madly after poison
That is not seen with reasons
Even if some one advises
We shall always miss

Nothing appeals
If it is real
We go after fairy tales
And dream about angels

No one can fly high and high
It has limit for try
Earth may pull back
Even if so much is at sake

The world is place
For us to live with known race
W can not think different
We need to remain among and very much present


Comments about With Known Race by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 8:40:00 PM)

    Astute observations on remaining grounded. I do however think that doing some dreaming and having an ideal to pursue can help to make more of the here and now... :)
    25 Aug by 'stiltskin. to With known race (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 10:25:00 AM)

    Astute observations on remaining grounded. I do however think that doing some dreaming and having an ideal to pursue can help to make more of the here and now... :)
    19 minutes ago by 'stiltskin. | Reply (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Good


    Moelich Odendal11 minutes ago
    One or two grammatical errors, but has a lot of potential.
    Comment 1 Comment0


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    you need o point out else i wont know what it can be (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    Each soul
    Responds to call (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,552 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/25/2014 9:40:00 AM)

    we need to remain very much present, good writing, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014



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