Without You Poem by Morose Mermaid

Without You

Rating: 4.4


WITHOUT YOU

What is there in between you and me? ?
Some untold and unheard tales
It feels like my life is empty,
It feels like every breath is empty
Without you.
Even the air feels empty
Without you.

Why every moments seems stranger to me?
Why we don't even want to look into each others eyes? ?
A dense loneliness is spreading all around
The destination lost its way
Even all my prayers are unheard as they are being untold without you.

Light has left me alone
Why has even the night left me?
Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me
Without you.

Tuesday, November 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Realization
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 27 November 2013

... you expressed your feelings wonderfully... could feel your pain when i was reading.... wonderful...

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Khairul Ahsan 30 November 2013

'Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you.' These two lines sum up the poem perfectly! Well done!

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Light has left me alone Why has even the night left me? Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you. loving wrote love 10+++++++++++++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2017

Light has left me alone Why has even the night left me? Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you. love and its mysteries....... a beutiful poem on love........ experience it when you are young....... the youth has its special nature which u may not get later. thank you for this great poem on love. God bless u dear poetess

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

a beautiful poem filled with a lot of sadness. Missing someone is very emotional

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Alok Singhal 01 December 2013

Touchingly expressed..a familiar feeling..

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Saadat Tahir 01 December 2013

A dense loneliness is spreading all around The destination lost its way strong emotive and a tad painful the quoted lines are v nice liked

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