Without You Poem by Neela Nath Das

Without You



Your secret you may keep
with you, but I know you won't
Go a step away from me.
I relish the sarcasm, jokes,
Hard or mild expression,
Your frequent frowning, everything,
You gift me out of joy or pain.
I often walk with you
when I'm awake or in dream,
Along the lanes of your twisted mind.
You are my sunrise and sunset,
And you are my key
Without whom I can't open my door.

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 08 July 2014

Thanks for the precious comments.Actually, I wait eagerly for the response.Love.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 July 2014

Very true said, you are my key, without you I cannot open the lock...I think you are talking about poem and poetic mind....beautiful. I just loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

I think it's a message to your readers and a lovely message in a well written poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 07 July 2014

A beautiful rose from your pen again- I like it

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