Work Together Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Work Together

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Work Together*


Every creature on earth has feelings no matter the age
And the 'Go Getters' want to set their own stage
They forget how they got to be so smart
For they were taught by the older one's heart
We learn from our elders on what we should do
and we should all work together to see all things through


13 May 2008


*response to David's poem 'Old and New'
thanks for the inspiration Big Bruv: O)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 14 May 2008

Lil sis, I agree wholeheartedly with every word you have said. The young tend to ignore the lessons the elders can give. Top marks and thanks for the mention Lil sis. Big Bruv

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Duncan Wyllie 14 May 2008

I love poetry that carries a positive feel to it, something of wisdom about this great write Take care JJB Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 13 May 2008

Wonderful sentiments in this poem JoAnn! A delight to read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! ! Friend Thad

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