What has happened to your love, poor thing?
You're empty, done
Close your eyes
If he doesn't deserve you to live for him
He's not worth dying for either
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(Ukhta, January 08 2014)
Hello poet Galina. A very powerfully written piece on one of the tragedies of love, and yet you ended with a very wise bit of advice. Great poem! I enjoyed, Loyd
What a neatly, tightly composed poem. And there is so much emotion compressed into half a dozen lines. Just the address POOR THING tells us how devastated the person must be. It also suggests she needs help, she has to rise above her disappointment or she will never heal. But it's the last two lines which make the poem so persuasive. It's a piece of advice which really works. And you can't dispute the second statement if you accept the first is true. I'm persuaded!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How well you ave chosen words! It is a powerful punch fora certain recovery, in my guess. Wonderful write it is.