Worthy Poem by Galina Italyanskaya

Worthy

Rating: 4.5


What has happened to your love, poor thing?
You're empty, done
Close your eyes
If he doesn't deserve you to live for him
He's not worth dying for either

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(Ukhta, January 08 2014)

Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 04 February 2015

How well you ave chosen words! It is a powerful punch fora certain recovery, in my guess. Wonderful write it is.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2014

Hello poet Galina. A very powerfully written piece on one of the tragedies of love, and yet you ended with a very wise bit of advice. Great poem! I enjoyed, Loyd

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Daniel Brick 23 November 2014

What a neatly, tightly composed poem. And there is so much emotion compressed into half a dozen lines. Just the address POOR THING tells us how devastated the person must be. It also suggests she needs help, she has to rise above her disappointment or she will never heal. But it's the last two lines which make the poem so persuasive. It's a piece of advice which really works. And you can't dispute the second statement if you accept the first is true. I'm persuaded!

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