Y... Just Above The Horizon Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y... Just Above The Horizon

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Up high,
Up high in the vast sky
I searched for ultimate beauty
Ultimate beauty was what I yearned to see
But then just inches above the horizon
Right in front of my wide open eyes
I found the most amazing
The most picturesque
Of all clouds
Luxurious soft pastels
Of light purple and
Mellow orange
Almost caressing the sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spiritual Seeker 26 November 2011

Beautifully written, deep in wisedom..as we search thru life! Great 10 Hans.. Kindly read my 'My sorrow' and 'The greatest Open Prison, Your Playground' Thanx....

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Walterrean Salley 11 November 2011

The clouds to save the day. They do make quite a conversation piece. The hues are always changing, also the motion, shape, and form. And coupled with the sea, they make quite an impression. Beautifully done Hans.

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Malaya Roses 11 November 2011

such a beautiful horizon to be seen from far apart and it is a proof the supremacy the Most Gracious and nature's beauty....! ! ! Well done! !

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Jacqui Broad 03 November 2011

Looking at the sun setting now, I wish I could have been at sea, with the wind blowing through my hair...to feel free just for that capturing moment. What a sight! Beauty is truly in the eyes of the beholder. Marvelous poem!

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Cristina Teodor 02 November 2011

Beautiful details of sunset projected on horizon, a game of delicate colours connecting sea with sky. Beautiful written..Cristina Teodor

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