Y..... More Than Just A Dream... Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y..... More Than Just A Dream...

Rating: 4.3


The future holds something bright.
We have gone through the agricultural revolution,
the industrial revolution, the IT revolution,
and what not.

The next one will be
the wisdom revolution
closely intertwined
with the kindness revolution.

The poetry of our current poets
is sizzling and boiling
boiling over and
soon will warm up the world.

Small kindnesses are slowly
taking the place of big greed.
Reason taking the place of violence.
Positivity replacing negative

The current warmongers will not last long
and perish in shame and regrets.
Soon the last remnants of our barbaric human behaviour
will remain captured on recorded images

They will serve as last proof
of an era that will be looked upon
with cold shivers
by the next generations of humans.

This is really more than a dream of mine.
It has grown into a conviction.
We do need poets to keep
writing their heart and soul

into poetry that speaks and inspires,
that motivates and gives warmth,
that is slowly but certainly
changing the world forever

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This one I wrote after reading a poem of Unwritten Soul.
This small piece of mine has no rhymes or meter,
It just poured out my heart.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 03 September 2012

Wonderful thoughts, ideals we all wish for.

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Joseph Anderson 15 September 2012

Profound thoughts, with great depths and beauty- maybe some day it may become a reality- A worthy and well penned write

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Unwritten Soul 15 September 2012

What this was written after read my poem? ? i was like What but i love it...a revolution of wisdom and love....i am gonna love it if there is such revolution, a peace of time evolution, that sown all wisdom, carry love together for each other around the world, i guess you are inspired by your own heart and soul...for this nice write, thanks Hans..._Soul, Unwritten Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 September 2012

Well, this work is so great and also full of truth. i can feel the lines and words here. they are like the light that is coming down from the sky so wise..i get impressed. well done.

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Valsa George 07 September 2012

Let your dream, rather conviction, prove to be a reality! A poem radiating a lot of positive energy!

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Heather Wilson 03 September 2012

A beautiful caring write for now and for the future, very inspiring, pourings from the heart are often the best.

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