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Aufie Zophy

(18 October 1964)

Y..... Quarks inside


The morning sunlight
In all its glory
The morning sunlight
In all its glam

Every molecule in my heart
Is jumping up and down
The quarks inside collide
Emanating a mini beam of light

I hope that this little beam of light
Coming from my heart in a way
Can just like the morning sun
Brighten the lives of those I meet today


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Submitted: Thursday, October 11, 2012
Edited: Friday, April 05, 2013

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  • Elena Sandu (11/11/2012 8:08:00 AM)

    I came back to this poem to read it again! How true! Sun is one of the best energy is free and we ony need to open hearts to accumulate then overcharged we can give light to others with no special efforts, without even being tired. (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (11/11/2012 3:41:00 AM)

    The ray of sunshine shall sparkle your day and the light shall brighten people next to you...
    Wonderful poem with sincere spirit within...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (11/11/2012 3:41:00 AM)

    The ray of sunshine shall sparkle your day and the light shall brighten people next to you...
    Wonderful poem with sincere spirit within...! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (10/22/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    what a wonderful ending.i really hope u warm and enlighten those u meet everyday
    nice and so positive.this poem really brightened me up.
    muchas gracias for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (10/19/2012 5:21:00 AM)

    What a poem! ! ! This is wonderful, I love it! I am sure everyone you met that day was filled with smiles feeling their hearts lighted. My heart is warmer now, your beam did thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Terry O'leary (10/16/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    Quarks or anti quarks... in either case, your poem has brightened my day (& night) ... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/11/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Excitation can make a beat drumming adrenalin to force your day in energetic way..yahoo! _Soul (Report) Reply

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