Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 2,106 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. The Golden Key (A Sonnet)


One day, I want to melt all gold on earth
And make a wonderful key with it all
This special key of incredible worth
Will be fit to unlock your heart and soul
The remote buttons will work like a smile
Like a lawine of sweet and loving words
I will turn that key with a manly style
And happy thoughts will fly to you as birds
A simple turn of the sweet golden key
Just like a wonder, magic fun and true
Will cause, for everyone to hear and see
A wave of peace and happiness in you
Let's dream of a universe filled with love
And all may get a key from High Above

Aufie Zophy,

Bachok
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Love your spouse,
Love your son
Love your daughter
Love your mother
Love your father
Love your sister
Love your brother
Love your friends
Love your neighbour
Love your colleagues
Love your pets
Love the drivers you meet on the road
Love the people you see in the lift
Love the people you meet on the bus
Love the people you meet on the train
Love all the people
Love your house
Love your car
Love your garden
Love the beach
love the woods
Love the grass
Love the flowers
Love the weeds
Love the ants
Love the clouds
Love the sun
Love the moon
And above all,
Love the Creator of all the above

And enjoy swimming in a sea of love

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Submitted: Friday, May 17, 2013
Edited: Sunday, November 30, 2014

Topic of this poem: love


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I liked the sonnets of Valerie Doren so much, that I decided to try a sonnet myself.
I hope you like it.

Comments about this poem (Y/. The Golden Key (A Sonnet) by Aufie Zophy )

  • Freshman - 2,096 Points Anthony Di''anno (5/21/2014 8:53:00 AM)

    A beautifully crafted sonnet not written for the praise,

    written for the love by the love.

    Excellent :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,047 Points Valerie Dohren (6/2/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    Excellent sonnet - very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/31/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    Very well crafted with a deep uplifting message. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (5/25/2013 5:18:00 AM)

    I like your sonnet very much, have you read any of mine? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (5/22/2013 12:08:00 PM)

    Each one of us holds a little golden key...if only we start unlocking the doors that block the light and barriers between people.....a big 10 for a beautiful sonnet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (5/18/2013 11:39:00 AM)

    Lovely sonnet written in Iambic pentameter. So often sonnets on this site ignore that requisit. Read mine - Sonnet Beyond Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (5/18/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    Lovely...golden key, where to get that pure gold and fine it to unlocked hearts
    If i could i will make it using a core of light that penetrate even to the soul
    and break the curse of the darkness..beautiful sonnet Aufie_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,500 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/17/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    A lovely sonnet . of course its a lovely one, who will not like it? melting within to outside up there from heaven / (Report) Reply

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