at dawn, some cantabile verses
which adorn magical effects
as droplets of water-pearls
kissing solemn meadows
in a middle bleakest-hollow sky
rain-tornado strongly brews
rumbling frantic clouds
returning very slowly
summer star’s sparkling brightly
through a depressed darkness
at last drawing wonderfully
a vivacious rainbow to us
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Ashes to Roses)
The poem describing the various scenes, right from dusk to dawn, highlighting on the top of all the rainbow scene is well composed.
great mind.great spirits.grat words and great dedication.posted 10 surya
a rainbow is always a welcome sight... a balm for weary eyes and spirit
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This piece has some sonorous metaphors and I loved the 'water-pearls kissing solemn meadows' - - lovely imagery throughout and deserves more than 10 - - best wishes from Fay.