! ! ! Yet No Room Of Reeks! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Yet No Room Of Reeks! ! !

Rating: 5.0


where is the room of reeks!
Green when laughs wild
Sky is open by beauty of silence
World smiles across its spumes

soul never redeems by grimace
ocean smiles through its waves
even storm mills all through
may be darkness there redounding

shadow slowly melts away
breeze still whispers ever again

warmth enlightens room of reason
as gleams of love bristles from above
leaf may not stop its sway
even being chilled by breath of snow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nicely said very good poem

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Linda Winchell 14 November 2008

Dear Dr. What are reeks? I'm sorry I am not a versed as you are in words such as these. Gave it a ten. Linda

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Anjali Sinha 03 November 2008

a beautiful piece that reeks of the beauty of your soul ++++++10 regards anju

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Tsira Goge 01 November 2008

.......... soul never redeems by grimace ocean smiles through its waves... ......................................... Amazing and surprising metaphors, it is simply pleasant to read...10...

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 November 2008

very fine/smooth piece...just like a curtain gradually drape down..to show what's behind..a new life..a rebirth of oneself....a new day, a new beginning....10+ from me for this very depth piece...God bless....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 November 2008

I felt so fresh reading this. Beautiful piece indeed...........10

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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