You Poem by eddine roy gomez

You

Rating: 5.0


This is dedicated for you sweetie

My life been a rough ride full of cracks and storms
so perilous to withstand firm by my own
all my hope been gone like sand washed away from shore
ive knelt, begging for mercy from God alone

Just all my hope are gone, your light touch me up
giving all that I didnt and what I may have
you fight with your sword of tongue i'd learn to clap
a pillar of strong love, shield of gold to dive

A sweet cherry, a sound of perfect harmony
warmth covering me when im cold in snow
a garden to behold, a watchful scenery
a stunning smell that the most comforting wind blow

Your the first attraction I set upon my eyes
the last feeling of ease, a feeling to be please
sweetie, be her to guide me, love pie, protect me
thank you for doing such, for doing what youve done

god give me you is what I can have in my mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Hi, a poem full of imagery about life struggles but with all those struggles, someone gives light in that lonely journey. Well written...only that don't forget to use formal mechanics in writing like 'I' instead of 'i' and ' I've' instead of 'i'd'. Well, for the first time, I rated you 10.Congrats.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 October 2011

she will be very happy when she reads this poem she is one lucky 'you'

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