You Poem by shruti modi

You

Rating: 5.0


I’m so lonely without you
I don’t even know who you are?
I’ve been looking all around
But get a lot of faint glances and lifeless hearts…

How do I even recognize you?
Or would you know it’s me who’s been looking for you!
Would you be sane enough to know that I’ve been insane about you?
Or have you always known that it’s me who’s made for you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
anurag duggal 29 April 2009

love a feeling divine sublime ....your poems are indeeed true not made up..express true feeling

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 15 September 2008

You write with an amazing simplicity that straightaway touches the heart.Thanks for this wonderful poem.

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

two lines for you... 'YAQEENAN EK ZINDAGI SAANSON KE PAAR HAI APNI RAAHON KA BHI KOI TALABGAAR HAI APNI ZINDAGI MEIN BHI TOH KOI PYAAR HAI!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

It is undoubtedly a beautiful poem with a different dimention. So my 10 for this.

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