You Poem by Sahar Sahar

You

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When i suffered from disappointments,
You was not there to face me,
And you was hiding, like an enemy,
A traitor with chain of promises,
When a lier explains,
Nothing gains,
Before a truth,
The truth is,
You ruined my future,
When i was a growing young.
In husle,
I decided to jump,
In fires of miseries,
And you are never green,
To shelve,
Springs in your life,
A smoke suspende in air,
A nightmarish spell,
To break the sleeps.
And life when weeps,
Blood peeps,
From skins,
And death,
Always wins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

When a lier explains, Nothing gains, Before a truth, The truth is, You ruined my future, When i was a growing young. In husle, I decided to jump, ....treachery and deceit always hunts hunt's the person's mind all the times..one should not deceive another person inlife...this is clear thing and should be understood by all... good poem....10 read mine.. cowards....no separate ways....anywhere....beauty

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C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

Intense feelings vehemently penned. Soulful poetry. Keep it up. CP

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Petra Soliman 13 September 2009

it's amazing, i love every & each line of it :) keep writing! ! ! xx

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