Vanessa Cabrera

Rookie (July 31 1987 / Guinobatan Calapan City Oriental Mindoro, Philippines)

You - Poem by Vanessa Cabrera

My life is so boring and i feel so blue.
Until you came to my life.I feel something diff'rent.
I see the shine in your eyes.
I see the glamour in your smile.
I see something diff'rent, diff'rent from others.

I don't know why? Why this man came to my life with love.Who has pure and divine heart.
He captured my sympathy,
coz i saw the light, i heard the melody of the finest song.
For he love me as much as i love him.
I thank God for giving me a chance to have... you.

-vanessa-


Comments about You by Vanessa Cabrera

  • Rookie - 41 Points Varanasi Ramabrahmam (4/11/2010 4:13:00 AM)

    A majestic and pleasant thanks-giving to the Divinity for the pleasure and intimacy provided. Very lovingly crafted verse oozing love and bliss. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie John Knight (3/22/2010 6:49:00 AM)

    Hi Vanessa Angel - I am pleased to post a comment on this lovely emotive poem. We all make a difference to each other when we interact in a loving spiritual way - either face to face or 'From a Distance' I am uplifted by knowing you and you are uplifted through knowing me. Verse One. Life can be boring - on our own - Then the LORD send someone into our lives with 'Smiling eyes' and 'Glamorous smile' and 'Everything becomes different'. Verse Two. It is a gift from the Lord - Vanessa - so we don't say why we just say THANK YOU. 'We see the light - we hear the song' That is the beauty of reciprocal LOVE - AWESOME. Thanks for sharing Angel - Love you in poetry - JOHN.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 6, 2010



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