Lora Colon

Gold Star - 4,988 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

You And I - Poem by Lora Colon

I am the rose, you are the thorn,
I am the calm, you are the storm,
I am the light, you are the dark,
You are the kindling, I am the spark

I am the grass, you are the weed,
I am the feast, you are the greed,
I am the sail, you're but a breeze,
You start the fight, while I appease

I am the song, you are the silence,
I am pacifism, you are contrivance,
I am steadfast, you are the pawn,
You are insufferable...... and I am gone!

Comments about You And I by Lora Colon

  • Rookie Ivory Irving (2/15/2014 5:40:00 PM)

    Two opposites trying to make it work but it won't if only one is putting in the effort so- enough is enough. That's how I see it. Love this, so true. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 36 Points Mac Adrone Adonay (2/7/2014 6:24:00 PM)

    there is a nice flow of rhythm, wise use of words. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/30/2014 2:31:00 AM)

    a dark satire, a different tune for Lora, but still a delight to read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 30, 2014

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