You Are A Beautiful, Great. Poem by Michael Gale

You Are A Beautiful, Great.

Rating: 1.5


You make my heart, freeze in time...
Baby, You make my heart skip it's beat.

You make me, fit this crime...
A crime of passioned, heart's
sweetened-tasty, treat.

Yes-You are so neat....
You are God's, artistic-Feat.

For you, I'd reel in the moon...
Of You, I, dream, early, morning-until,
the late-after noon.

My late, evening's wait...
Greets, your, eternally-long awaited-gait.

You are my love...
A beautiful, great.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 19 July 2009

Wonderful use of words here Michael...image perfection...Fi 10+++

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Catrina Heart 18 July 2009

lovely sweet verses...fine metaphors! 10

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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