You Are A Burden Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

You Are A Burden

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You are a burden
Monday,3rd August 2020

"You are a burden on this beautiful poetry land?
why don't you go and end up as a poet?
there is nothing left in you aspoetry
some learned poets criticized me regularly

how come I become a burden!
I parried question even
if you are a gifted poet
why don't you work quietly?

I thought for a while
and decided to go miles
the poems emanate from the fertile and affectionate mind
where you can only find the restraint wisdom and kindness

why do the people provoke?
and create hatred of smoke?
is there any room for such people?
who not only struggle in their life but down others too

people write under the veil of secrecy
use the different names even of females for poetry
such people lose not only credibility
but expose their inability

poetry is pure water flow
where it allows no hatred!
but peace and harmony
in thought and in action for humanity

Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

You Are A Burden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 02 August 2020

out of hate, some can't criticize positively, H.A.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2020

welcome eden s trinidad 1 Edit or delete this Like · Reply · 1m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2020

poetry is pure water flow where it allows no hatred! but peace and harmony in thought and in action for humanity Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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