You Are A Burden Here Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
You Are A Burden Here
You are a burden here
Monday,3rd August 2020
"You are a burden on this beautiful poetry land?
why don't you go and end up as a poet?
there is nothing left in you aspoetry
some learned poets criticized me regularly
how come I become a burden!
I parried question even
if you are a gifted poet
why don't you work quietly?
I thought for a while
and decided to go miles
the poems emanate from the fertile and affectionate mind
where you can only find the restraint wisdom and kindness
why do the people provoke?
and create hatred of smoke?
is there any room for such people?
who not only struggle in their life but down others too
people write under the veil of secrecy
use the different names even of females for poetry
such people lose not only credibility
but expose their inability
poetry is pure water flow
where it allows no hatred!
but peace and harmony
in thought and in action for humanity
Dr. Jadia Hasmukh
A Best poem worded...........but WHO is Dr. Jadia Hasmukh? I just wanna know Do you know Dr. Richard Tjan? He is my genial brother. Dr. T.I.Tan? He is my beloved husband. Dr. Pintu Mahakul? He is my best friend from FB and the eldest son of my dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir from PF poem site and from PoemHunter.
You are not at all a burden in this poetry site rather we are very happy getting you here as poet friend. You are gifted by Almighty and you have to travel miles peacefully by his grace. No others can cause harm. Few good poets are motivated by that bad man who uses pseudo-heads to motivate others. Many do not know about his nasty politics. They have fallen in his trap when he has sent messages from other names.
The bad man who has harassed you a lot has no credibility rather he has evil mentality. But he and others who are temporarily motivated by him cannot cause any harm to you. He should write poetry but he is creating disturbance. This is so sad. But you should not be worried and continue writing. Poetry should reflect peace. We write here for harmony, peace and joy for humanity. Hatred cannot cause harm at all.
This poem is a very amazing poem very brilliantly penned and this is thought provoking poem. We feel your emotion you express. We feel the beauty of expression and we realize your hard work. This poem is excellently penned....10
Poem: 58894814 - You Are A Burden Here Member: M Asim Nehal Comment: Great satire on those so called poets who are writing for the sake of points or to degrade others. They won't gain anything except defaming themselves. Nice poem 10
Great satire on those so called poets who are writing for the sake of points or to degrade others. They won't gain anything except defaming themselves. Nice poem 10
Date & Time: 8/3/2020 5: 09: 00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 58894814 - You Are A Burden Here Member: Lyn Paul Comment: There is enough hatred in this world with it affecting this site that brings joy to so many. Thank you
Comment: Poem: 58894814 - You Are A Burden Here Member: Kumarmani Mahakul . This is so sad. But you should not be worried and continue writing. Poetry should reflect peace. We write here for harmony, peace and joy for humanity. Hatred cannot cause harm at all.
There is enough hatred in this world with it affecting this site that brings joy to so many. Thank you
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but peace and harmony in thought and in action for humanity Dr. Jadia Hasmukh