When you arrive
you let me know
that you are alive
You come and then
You go
at the table of desire
we get pleasure
and we get pain
and sometimes
our tears
they fall
just like the rain
You come and
then you go
the sun
is going down
its light
is fading
slowly in the sky
You come and then
You go
just like a whisper
in the night
You come and then
You go
The poem in a way defines a situation where human relationships are being undermined. There is a sense of casualness or lack of commitment. This is the reality of our time. Thanks & Congrats, Dorsey Baker.
WE ALL ARE BORN WITHOUT EXCEPTION to come then GO You have read my moms smiles also you came and now you go
Unsteady love! ! Love and friendship. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You come and then You go just like a whisper in the night You come and then You go.. very fine full of emotions.. thank u. tony
at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain simple human feelings and reactions very well portrayed. tony
Really a poignant bit of verse, very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Great poem. Relationships have their ups and downs. One looks backs fondly on all the memories with certain sweetness and the sting of a thorn. Congratulations for member poem place.
Loved the poem which sounds simple, but highly emotional! Touches the right cord in our heart! The lines which are memorable to me - " at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain" What a beautiful rhythmic flow!
It falls down to lack of respect from loved ones. Who needs this? Happy Festive season.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You come and then You go at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain/// beautiful writings yeah love comes and goes, love brings happiness, pleasure when it comes with smiling but when it goes with tears then we get pain and hurt inside heart as well as at the table of desire/// beautiful poetic expression