' You Laughed And Laughed And Laughed Poem by Efe Benjamin

' You Laughed And Laughed And Laughed

Rating: 2.9


I told you I was in love,
But you laughed and
Laughed and laughed.
.
I gave you my love,
But you did not give me yours,
Instead, you kept mine, and
Gave yours to another.
.
You laughed at my song,
You laughed at my walk,
Then I danced my magic dance
to the rhythm of the talking
drums pleading.
.
But you shut your eyes, and laughed
And laughed and laughed.

Monday, June 1, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 01 June 2009

tender poem sadness too 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

A lot of laugh- outcome is sorrow. Touching composition,10+

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Bharati Nayak 28 June 2023

A beautiful poem about unrequitted love.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 January 2016

You laughed at my song, You laughed at my walk, Then I danced my magic dance to the rhythm of the talking drums pleading. i danced my magic dance............ love this line in your poem. you are true in portraying the vows of a love relationship, a one way......... thank you. tony

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Godfrey Morris 23 May 2015

Enjoyed reading this poem.

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Brandie ......... 05 June 2009

A soft poem. I liked it. +10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 June 2009

A gentle and soft poem, Efe.....Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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Efe Benjamin

Efe Benjamin

Delta State, NIGERIA
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