You Stank! Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

You Stank!

Rating: 5.0


On my land...
I am squeezed!
On your land...
You walk around
Feeling the cool breeze.
You tell me I should share.
From a guilt you put there!
But you collect,
Without regret...
From my sweat.
And say I should pray,
And give thanks!
While I watch views of you...
Taking all I have,
And putting that into your bank!
You 'more' than stink!
You 'stank'!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 23 February 2007

L.O.L.= Laugh Out Loud

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poetry lover 23 February 2007

you stank! yes we know, don't fake what you write be real

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