Young Love - Old Oak Poem by John Knight

Young Love - Old Oak

Rating: 5.0


When you were twelve in 1946 you did what all boys do
Fishing in streams and collecting conkers
Riding madly on unsafe bicycles
Bonfire noight - hoping for Fire Engine
Impatient for Winter - Snowballs & Snowmen!
When you are twelve boys do NOT fall in love.
But unexpectenly it happens - Collette was different.
Dark - sexy and with her so so French accent.

What was a French Girl doing in Oldham
So soon after the War? Her father was a designer
In the Textile Factory - so he brought Collette with him.
I was doomed - Collette sat next to on her first day.
Somehow her fragrance was not that of a Girl.
It was the 'Scent of a Woman' - I was smitten!
When she held my hand that too was different.
Different from Alice and-Mary and Jean.
When she squeezed my hand it electrified..........
My whole body - Instinctively I knew this must be LOVE! ! !

We kissed (a la francaise de rigeur!)
We cuddled and went as far as preteens went..............
In 1946 - which was not really very far!
After two years of 'Puppy Love' Collette anounced
'Nous retournons a Paris la semaine prochaine'
Toute siute - We knew we must do something.....
Very special and very personal before it was too late!
So we planted two acorns as tokens of our love.
We planted them too close - so they grew as one.
Their trunks interlocked as they grew taller each year.

I never forgot Collette - but she dissapeared for ever.
While our love died the entwined oaks flourished.
First two interlocked saplings then a fine oak tree.
It is over sixty years since Collette faded from my life
But the memories of her remain locked in my heart.
Her scent - her touch - her softness - her voice
Her hair - her eyes - her lips - her special kissing
And all the other 'French' things she taught me each day..

'Our Oak Trees' remember with me - They remember
The seasons - The cold bitterness of Winter - when we
Walked together as one - cuddled against the cold.
The joy of our innocent love stirring with the singing birds
And budding trees that healded the beauty of Spring.
The two long hot Summers - Collette and I so enjoyed together
The many Summers since when our tree grew taller each day.
The Autumn when the leaves of our oaks turned yellow -
Orange - brown and then gently fell with each fresh breeze.

It tipifies that autumn in 1948 when we said 'au revoir'
Which turned out to be 'adieu' and - for me - ushered in....
A Winter of silence - sorrow and sentence of remorse.
Of course - Life had to go on. I married and had Children
And today I have eight Grandchildren.one of whom
Is called Collette because my daughter married a Frenchman!
I still see 'Our Oaks' which most people think is one tree
I see them season by season across the field from the house
Of my parents - which I still occupy - a daily reminder.
I watch them and wonder - what might have been!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
masked lady 29 December 2009

My poet knight, your poem makes me look back of my young love with a smile. Like your Collette, I never have never forgotten him but life has to go on, and i now have my own family as he has his own. Great piece my poet knight. Your poems always touch the heart of your readers. This is a real great gift. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Rachel Butler 10 November 2009

'But the memories of her remain locked in my heart. Her scent - her touch - her softness - her voice Her hair - her eyes - her lips - her special kissing' Rachel Ann Butler

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 09 November 2009

Your way in writing this is so lovely. This poem is a well penned love poem. I love the V telling 'bout the memory of the oak tree in 1948, a very long flashback, so nice. I score this ten.

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Georgia Girl 02 November 2009

This is simply LOVELY, I love the picture that it inspires of young love in a different time, I sometimes wish that life was more like those times now, where everybody knew everyone and the children could roam safely :) such a beautiful time :) ...beautiful young love grown into a glorious oak...simply beautiful John...10

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

What a cool story you've memorialized (again) with a poem. The things of youth are always so much larger, mysterious and haunting, somehow. Thanks for the sweet descriptions abounding in here..(smile)

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