Your Beauty Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Your Beauty



Your smile is like the new moon of Eid
Your face is like the full moon of spring
Your eyes are like the eclipse of the sun
Your hair is like the cloud of monsoon
Your eyebrows are like a flying eagle
Your lips are like red strawberry.
Your voice is like sweet music
Your style of walk is like rhythm of poem.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RAS KDC 29 October 2008

YOUR POEM IS VERY NICE

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xxxxx xxx 29 October 2008

masallah brother, you expose your emotions nicely

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Norma Southwood 08 October 2008

Asif, I must say that your poem reminded me of 'The Song of Solomon' too, and that is a compliment. I'm glad you explained about the river, I have never heard of it, and would love to know why the water is black. Enjoyed your poem.

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Emily Sherwood 04 October 2008

I like this poem. It reminds me a little of the Song of Solomon, in the Jewish/Christian Old Testament. It is a good start, but looks incomplete a bit. Keep working on it, and it could turn out really good! :)

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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