indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Your Eyes - Poem by indira babbellapati

in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes

i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night

30sep2009
19.58hrs


Comments about Your Eyes by indira babbellapati

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/23/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    In you eyes …
    I see many unseen things too.
    Nice poem Didi
    Ten++
    UK

    Thanks for comments
    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Enigmatic Navel
    Lie Sly or other poems.
    niv (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 936 Points Rachel Ann Butler (10/10/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    I see the mysterious depths

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patrick A. Martin (10/9/2009 7:15:00 PM)

    I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/9/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment
    Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment.....

    a good write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (10/7/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (10/7/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (10/6/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    Got omni vision still Poet quests for more and …well let poet say in next poem.
    Nice ten
    dr.sakti
    Cordially invite to my page.
    ds (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (10/5/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    The love in his eyes you see is expressed beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pitilosi Mdala (10/5/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    This poem is against infidelity, is quite, super and wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (10/5/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    beautiful mystic disclosure! nice phrasology! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (10/5/2009 5:07:00 AM)

    Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ranjit Ravindran (10/4/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes.

    Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot!
    A sweet 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (10/3/2009 8:40:00 AM)

    A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvesh Kulkarni (10/2/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    ohh yes, and-
    'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Maitreyee Joshi (10/1/2009 11:41:00 AM)

    i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (10/1/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    You see everything in 'eyes'; but as you stroll along the sand on the sea shore...? ? ? to me, merger is not compete, indira.....otherwise how can you be subjective n objective? ? ? Or is it the case of vivid imagination; sort of possessed n obsessed....; sort of, being in trance..? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (10/1/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    beautifully expressed feelings Indira - your eyes is a lovely piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (10/1/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    The eye's have it by a longshot (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (10/1/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    your eyes just yes always remembering......and amazing....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nouri Black (10/1/2009 5:53:00 AM)

    wooow that really amzin, i loved it, i know how that feel ^_^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 1, 2009


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