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indira babbellapati

Rookie - 38 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

your eyes


in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes

i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night

30sep2009
19.58hrs

Submitted: Thursday, October 01, 2009
Edited: Sunday, November 01, 2009

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  • Rookie - 39 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/23/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    In you eyes …
    I see many unseen things too.
    Nice poem Didi
    Ten++
    UK

    Thanks for comments
    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Enigmatic Navel
    Lie Sly or other poems.
    niv (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (10/7/2009 11:26:00 PM)

    A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (10/7/2009 2:23:00 PM)

    Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ranjit Ravindran (10/4/2009 4:47:00 AM)

    I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes.

    Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot!
    A sweet 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (10/1/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    You see everything in 'eyes'; but as you stroll along the sand on the sea shore...? ? ? to me, merger is not compete, indira.....otherwise how can you be subjective n objective? ? ? Or is it the case of vivid imagination; sort of possessed n obsessed....; sort of, being in trance..? ? ? (Report) Reply

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