in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes
i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night
30sep2009
19.58hrs
ohh yes, and- 'your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.'
A stunning and mystic poem on the reflection and depth of a loved one's eyes. I felt I was at the sea shore with you as your images were superb! 10 love Karin
I often wondered why does a portrait look empty even though the frame is filled with the subject. Professional photographers always tell me that its the eyes that tells the story. Mostly shooting bespectacled subjects causes the glare to washout their eyes. Loved this poem not only for its artistic projection but also for its message that justifies the above problem. Thanks a lot! A sweet 10
Stunning Indeed, such beautiful poetry in every read... Andy 10
In you eyes … I see many unseen things too. Nice poem Didi Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira
Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment..... a good write!
A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i just loved the way you expressed the way you perceive that loved ones eyes.thanks ma'am.