when i kissed your palm
i was afraid if injured
then kiss made me calm
but when i kissed your thumb
and i was relaxed
my heart accelerated
heart is a crazy pump
and your weird index
it is not just a finger
if just gave a gesture
obedience will be reflex
and your middle finger
why the cutest is middle
why not the first
but being the longest
make this forgiven
and your ring finger
where you wear the ring
if i looked at it
I own every thing
and your little finger
it may look a little
but from it
sugar sprinkles
very nice imagination.........an interesting poem to read............good work.
Close observation of her every finger with soft touch and feel but reader can not see your fingers who are touching and feeling.You have depicted her hand without thinking her body.....nice poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Again a great imagery...........Ahmed.............how love shines on respective fingers, the feelings of which very delicately conveyed.........superb.....