Your Love ❤️~ A Moving Mirror Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Your Love ❤️~ A Moving Mirror

Rating: 5.0


Your body is a moving mirror
It reflects my ledge of shadows
Cling to the moonlight through goblet
Hanging like the droplets.

The frozen love during maritime
In the ocean of relationship
In the midst of Antarctica
When we were draped in body heat.

The prism of your eyes
Left a silhouette of majestic charm
Showing more moons than Jupiter
Revolving around me making aura of love.

I am fetching words to engrave an elegy
Upon my flexible spine of thoughts
To mend with your curves and curvatures
And fall like sand grains in hourglass.

Your Love ❤️~ A Moving Mirror
Wednesday, September 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 30 September 2020

Excellent poem M.A.N. You are exploring her in the context of the cosmos...thats endless pleasure....ecstasy even. Hooray. Loving it

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Sandra Feldman 30 September 2020

A poetically imaginative and melodious cadence of loving sensations and deeply felt adoring images of chosen love. A flow of beauty throughout, Hard to forget impressions that are really unique and so deeply felt, that they easily find their way into the readers heart, A very fine work of art.

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Varsha M 30 September 2020

This is one of your best execution of poetic skills. Beautiful poetry

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Sharad Bhatia 30 September 2020

A pure brilliant poem. Enjoyed reading 100++

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Gordon Walter 30 September 2020

Wow wow wow....100*** I am fetching words to engrave an elegy Upon my flexible spine of thoughts To mend with your curves and curvatures And fall like sand grains in hourglass.

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Poetic Sky 30 September 2020

Such is the magic of love that it even the nature and its beauty can make a poemt think and write about.

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Graham Wilson 30 September 2020

Yes nature is true reflector of our thoughts and mind the love with nature is not less than the love with humans.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2020

Love is wonderful moving mirror and it reflects the definite shadow. The frozen love keeps the relationship with wonderful ocean. You have felt the truth. Prism of eyes reflect nice and new vision. This poem is excellently penned with natural imagery and nice imager! ...5 stars! ...

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T Rajan Evol 30 September 2020

Last stanza took it to a different level: : I am fetching words to engrave an elegy Upon my flexible spine of thoughts To mend with your curves and curvatures And fall like sand grains in hourglass.

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Deepak S S 30 September 2020

What a moving mirror of love, this one is in your usual style.

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