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in this grave where her heart is laid,
so much disappointed for not having him as her shade,
the abstract image that was drawn on the tombstone fades,
for her heart, when still alive, was never ever given any, even a little grace.
...

'i will write a poem for you again..if we will reconcile and live happily ever after..'
this was the last emotional sentence of the poem i wrote for you 7 months ago,
the revelation i told you, i thought, could help me to let these feelings go,
this heart of mine, when you're here, goes slow mo.
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i feel sorry for you girl,
for choosing him to be loved by you,
you still don't know what he does to you secretly,
yet, you are continuing to love him gently.
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Ten..
more than ten times I used to cry,
because of him and them and I still try,
to be good and yet, they let my heart fry,
...

Five..
5 times a day i always ask my mother,
if i have that kind of gift like any other,
she used to say i'm fair until she has no more words to utter,
...

darkest part of this challenging life, i used to remember,
when i couldn't find an abode, even a crying shoulder,
i brayed for the pain that i couldn't easily bear,
for nobody has showed me, even a little care.
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during our younger years, you decided to leave and surrender,
what you promised that you used to say it would be forever,
i was not hurt that time, for you, i didn't care,
and the game between the two of us, because of me, was unfair.
...

being stuck in the middle of nowhere,
she just can't help but wonder,
for he, is nothing, but a barrier,
to feel the extreme guilt to the other.
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'i love you'
if only i can tell you everyday
if only i can hug you instead of making a fray
saying sweet words instead of making you mad
...

catching a glimpse of the others
something triggers my mind to wonder
most choose a world they more prefer
yet, they still can't find what makes them happier.
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if only i could explain why I'm doing these things to you
if only i could tell that you're the reason why I'm blue
i am sorry if i have a different point of view
everything won't work out fine if i allow you to continue.
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as my pen forces me to write
it's funny that i feel so stupefied
in this blizzard of loneliness, i don't wanna ride
for i was abandoned by my unreal, playful guide.
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criticizing me causes them so much delight
hearing their judgments, i lose my appetite
sometimes i wonder if i have to fight or flight
but i do not care! I SIMPLY HAVE POSITIVE INSIGHTS. :)
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if only i could tell how much you mean to me
there's no reason for me to suffer from this misery
if only i have the strength to fight my stupidity
this body can resist to fall against your gravity.
...

poeticgirl 100993 Biography

-i am a bachelor of science in secondary education student(major in english) ,17 years of age and a resident of orani, bataan(philippines) ..at your first glance, you will say that i am a girl with serious and snobbish-like face..but it's a big no no! .i am simple, talkative, reliable, funny, and of course, i really love writing and that's one way of expressing myself..and i've already proved it to anyone. :))

The Best Poem Of poeticgirl 100993

Heart's Grave

in this grave where her heart is laid,
so much disappointed for not having him as her shade,
the abstract image that was drawn on the tombstone fades,
for her heart, when still alive, was never ever given any, even a little grace.

she doesn't know why they have to let their memories fade,
though before, their love was strong as jade,
the promises that they once made,
cuts her bleeding heart like a sharp blade.

she remembers when her heart used to live happily,
it always wakes up so in love, inspired, and lively,
she listens to love songs and writes a happy ending love stories,
for her heart believes that its other half won't let her go in a lone prairie.

despite the slaps that hit the heart's face,
it still continued to win the race,
until it lost, and all it only felt was daze,
and decided to enjoy life in different phase.

her heart, when still loving him, accepted many criticisms,
it just smiled, and used a lot of defense mechanisms,
though, it was already full of anger and sarcasm,
it used to loved still, like light reflects on a prism.

the heart let itself go and enjoyed the thrills in its life,
but suddenly, their memories came, and struck it with a knife,
it felt down little by little, with tears her heart wished he would wipe,
until it lost its breath, and left it in its own blood that was ripe.

now that her heart was dead,
there's so many things that will be forever left unsaid,
for its one simple wish was not granted,
and that was the feeling of being comforted.


*please, do make some comments or suggestions how to make this poem improved..i wrote this a week ago..thank you.*

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