Cotton Mouth Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Cotton Mouth

Rating: 5.0


Cotton mouth...this word...
renders..some..
southern condition....
and ripe sweet breath...
sometimes deeply held...
stations....laid out...
pasts..hidden...
revealed....situations..
sought out....
Cotton mouth...and...
woodpiles...that..
whisper...over sweating..
navels....bodies clean..
of thought..unwashed..
hard...clamoring for..
attention...when..trees..
hang over the strong fence...
might gives way...and more..
The other is so...digressive..
and backing up...you fall...
unheard...and it slides up...
with you watching...wide eyed..
never too fear...deep inside..
what you hide...from the day...
Behind the curtain....
made of cotton you wait...
and there being....
no stranger around...
From the heart of town...
the known stranger...
moves through the window...
opportunity and moon...
leaving wide the ditch...
for tomorrows...local...crew..
and molasses runs slow...
To the man...and some ask...
about that cotton mouth....
man...
that ran sun yellow...
through the dawn...

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
. . 31 August 2009

Lol! ! ! I complement you both on your writes iip and P. Both wonderful and creative. :)

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Patti Masterman 31 August 2009

wow you pulled out, every stop... and the train ran away then....too fast .d ..o ...w. ....n.. the mountain....... and it was....... ... very beautiful for the brief moment.... it hung- spinning there..mpm: -)

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