[01] Endless Time Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

You are my sweetest heart of all times: I don't care if you are man or woman - But I believe as long as you write sensible and wise then you casse us to live a motionword

i vote for this poem

Sorrow is a small virus dark blue spreading spores into my blood... ........................................... Very modern and surprising poems...Bravo! 10... Tsira

good poem with a good composition.......deserves a 10

great! special poem is it!

Aristotle argues that time manifest itself in the change of things but the change itself is not time: “So time is either change or some aspect of change; and since it is not change, it must be some aspect of change” By expressing the concept of time and by using conceptual metaphors, eg 'What is existing or non-existing nothing can be shared '' and cognitive metaphors, eg ''Sorrow is a small virus dark blue spreading spores into my blood'' and visual metaphors, eg ''I’m a tree beside the street and time is walking in front of me '' the poet needs to prove that time can mean, in some conditions a change in itself.. genial poem...10++

Again an enviable thought process...yet here a bit torn amongst ideas...yet 10++ for your unique way of thinking....Brishti

While reading this poem I felt that I was sitting inside the 'Time Machine' of HG Wells and the control stick in fast forward motion....! 10+ -Raj Nandy

yes we are loosing pockets, wallots and every thing.........nicely penned..........

A great write! Very sharp and impressive allegories and metaphors. Definitely 10 for it. With all sincerity