(026) Topsy Turvy House.......(My Favourite) Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(026) Topsy Turvy House.......(My Favourite)

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My house is always upside down
It is the funniest house in town
If you throw waste in a dustbin
Or any different type of tin
It will kick the waste back on your face
And push you at their fastest pace
If you don’t wake up from the bed
It will throw out cockroaches fat and red
The tooth brush will brush inside your nose
The tooth paste will lie beneath your toes
The comb will brush the hair on your eyes
The oven will burn all your pies
All the juice will splash on your face
It will also splash inside your nose, what a place.
That’s what will happen if you live in my house
With a mouse that wouldn’t let you drowse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Someone Else 23 March 2007

nice story poem-strong beginning, good build up-approaching a great ending - then ----- see message

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

It sounds like a Students house... Risha

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Diane Violet 21 November 2006

This is so cute and funny Risha, thank you for the smile.

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

haha.... this one's cuute.. Asma...

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Prasanna Kumari 09 October 2006

i wanted to write like this, Risha.but you wrote it for me.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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