031610j Before Darkness Come Poem by Manonton Dalan

031610j Before Darkness Come



i'm trying to go up to that hill
to stretch my hand in victory
to scream to the world i did
face the heaven and wait
for lightning to strike me
rain will pour vengeance

every time i think i chuckle
why the hill not the river
where i got my first swim
where i caught my first fish
where i took my first kiss
where i dream start to finish

no sense of doing but shadow
lurking silently moonlit below
if there's left of teasing sand
running through my veins i would
for dust to settle before darkness come
is a known cycle we should overcome

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ena N. Mori 16 March 2010

'if there's left of teasing sand running through my veins i would...' primary metaphor of your poem (i'm not sure though: -))

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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