After The Rain Poem by Manonton Dalan

After The Rain

Rating: 4.6


certain stillness up above
harmony after raindrop
birds start singing again
trees dripping wet; clean

fruit washed; so beautiful to look at
i could see ants crawling on branch
later on, grass grow, flowers bloom
as grasshoppers hopping for room

feel freshness of wind blow
hear ruffling leaves in hollow
see ebbing river; crystal clear
breath freely love is here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna jonson 28 August 2008

waaaaaaaaaw fool of beautiful description of nature

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Nora Eason 05 September 2008

Great poem. keep up the great writing.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

The imagery of this poem is universal. Beautiful composition.

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 September 2008

...thanks for your comment... ...your poem is touching.every line .just like our life..after so many trials...there's happiness waiting ahead of us......

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Arwen Lee CW 21 September 2008

Despite gloomy clouds in the sky, we will find the way to sunshine...... And we shall bath in the sunshine-after the rain. :)

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Tom Allport 06 May 2017

a nice refreshing poem of nature doing her best to clean and quench the things that she loves......well written.

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Poppy Miller 17 January 2016

Great imagery here Manonton. I love the smell of the earth after the rain. Everything is washed clean and fresh.

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Valsa George 25 December 2015

With rain a lot of changes happen in Nature. Leaves grow greener, flowers bloom, birds begin singing again and everyone feels fresh! A lovely write!

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Hemendra Singh Deopa 20 December 2015

This is wonderful poem of yours as you mentioned about the beauty around to notice and to pen down, very nice poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2015

The freshness of life after the rain. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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