(1) A Yogic Stillness Poem by leonard daranjo

(1) A Yogic Stillness

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Serene, silent and receptive
Awaits deep stillness to receive
Nectar distilled from a cosmic bee hive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alice Anne Gordon 22 September 2007

Just by reading it a few times, I felt relaxed and serene! 'Cosmic Bee Hive' - loved it. Regards AA Gordon.

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Bob Blackwell 08 June 2008

Three lines of beauty, three lines of truth, three lines to bring one in touch with the nectar of a cosmic bee hive, which can only be of benefit to us all. Thank you. Bob

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Abha Sharma 23 April 2008

The yogic collation is the union with the Eternal…. …the imagery of a cosmic bee hive refurbishes both the power and the paraphernalia… This piece accrues all yogic knowledge accumulatively. Thank you so much for showering the nectar of your astuteness.

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Malini Kadir 31 March 2008

a strong an image in so few a word!

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Alison Cassidy 26 September 2007

As one familiar with your subject, may I compliment you on a wonderful metaphor. 'Nectar distilled from a cosmic beehive' is highly original and dripping with truth. love, Allie xxxx

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Indira Babbellapati 22 September 2007

how nectar drips...d...r...o...p...by d...r...o...p...from that cosmic beehive! what a fantastic visual it creates as the earth openes its mouth to savour each drop. good show, leonard!

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