sandy nobody

Rookie (midwest, usa)

10 Arrows - Poem by sandy nobody

you shot your arrows
into my heart
thought was love
turned out not

the first arrow made me fall
the second went thru me to the wall

the third arrow cut me in half
the forth made you laugh

the fifth arrow drained my blood
the sixth took all it could

the seventh arrow cut like a knife
the eighth took my life

the nineth took my soul
the tenth was your goal

your arrows killed me
took everything they could
nothing left now to get
or you would


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  • Rookie Jim Foulk (12/15/2006 7:01:00 PM)

    VERY DIFFERENT TYPE OF POEM I LIKED IT. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 7, 2010


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