All dressed up and no where to go.
would love to see a picture show.
Who cares!
Who wants me?
I’m old, cracked and crusted you see.
The years have taken their toile on me.
I no longer have smooth beautiful skin,
instead, I’m wrinkled saggy, with a sloppy chin.
My boobs that stood pert and showy for all to see,
now hang to my knees, flat as can be.
What say you, when you look at me,
awkward question my dear,
Hmmm afraid to tell me.
Don’t be afraid, my body speaks for itself.
You can roll me up and place me on a shelf.
Written: Feb.16/2007
Don’t worry fellow poets, I’m just in a mood. It’s
Friday night and I ain’t got nobody. Hmmm I think
someone made a song, oh yeah it was on Saturday
night wasn’t it. Well no matter, this is Friday for
another hour or so. This is not a true story by the
way. I look great, just in a weird mood is all. I’m
not even drinking, darn I don’t drink. LOLOLOL
I’ll delet this another day. Tonight if you dare to
read this, OH well…………LOLOL
Written: Feb.16/2007
I love the humor in this one, although the questions asked from a wife or even a girl friend are those of the most dangerous kind to us guys. I really love the description in this one, and the humor. Thanks once again for another brilliant piece. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison
Melvina you are so brave! You write about life...the way it really is...you write about loneliness and pain in a way that we can understand. You write about what we feel but are too afraid to show With love and care Pia
My My...... You really do have a way to proove that you are a poet. You have a way to express... you have a way with words! You write so well! BTW... we know its not true.... of what you say for yourself in the poetry... but those concluding lines were more true!
Melvina, what a lovely bit of humour. It cheers up all who read it. Especially all with the Crow feet around their eyes and the bags under them, not forgetting the triple chin. I loved it. Thanks for sharing it. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wierd mood or not this is a fine piece of humor and a great way to start the nite.... thanx Melvina