138.Heaven Next Door-Another Love Story Poem by rajagopal haran

138.Heaven Next Door-Another Love Story



The alchemy touched my soul
Transformed my copper-like soul
Into glittering gold of love!
I searched for him all around
Whereas he stretched his arm
And held my feet!
He being the water of my life
No illness can remain in me!
In the rose garden of my love
No thorn can dare exist!

There is no window between our hearts
As there is no wall between us!
My sweet heart appeared
Out of my bosom closed so long!
He remains as ghee in buttermilk
Giving the feeling like honey in milk
I don’t meet my lover
As we are in each other all along!

When I am with him
We are awake all night
When he is not with me
I don’t get sleep!
With the face so charming
And the heartfelt smile and laughter
He makes my life gentler
Can’t explain the goings and comings
As he enters suddenly
I am to be found nowhere for the humans


18 12 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 December 2008

Commendable work, here, indeed....Effulgent imagework, and ice-gliding structure highlight this creative love verse. FjR

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Tiruchirapalli-Tamilnadu-India
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