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13th December - My Birth day

On this day, I came to this world
I cried for, where I came and with
What destiny of my life
What my mother would have thought
About her newly born baby, she might
have kissed my head with so many wishes.

My all well wishers and family members
might have enjoyed
But none had imagined about
the future struggle of my life.

My Dad had said, forehead of his son
is high so as to sky, he will blossom
and fragrance of his son will
enchant all the passers –by.

Five decades of my life is passed
still the achievement of my life
appears to be zero by zero.

Yet hopeful for my life with gross achievement
as the resonance of all hope and belief
of my parents and all well wishers
are still ALIVE.

Submitted: Monday, December 12, 2011
Edited: Monday, December 12, 2011


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  • Heather Wilkins (6/14/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    excellent write Ramesh. Happy Birthday and many more returns.

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/23/2012 8:11:00 AM)

    beautiful with nice last stanza 10

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  • Anu Sipps (2/25/2012 3:59:00 AM)

    LIKE YOUR POEM SO NICE ONE

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  • Unwritten Soul (2/8/2012 5:58:00 AM)

    Oh i am sure after 5decades you go through no not have 0 anymore but uncountable...it just you dont know how to count them.. :) , Ramesh i hope you still accept my wish Happy belated birthday i missed almost about a month...but the wish is eternal green...with the life you have now i hope you make all around happy with your presence...Your mom wish still true, and your dad said nothing less than to be real for you..keep it up, nice writing, that''s how 5decades work...polishing your talent.._Unwritten Soul

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/31/2011 10:13:00 PM)

    be positive..hv faith in ur talents..
    u r a grt poet..ur poems says dat...
    ur dad was correct....
    nice poem

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  • Sajna Kailas (12/19/2011 5:20:00 AM)

    Five decades of my life is passed
    still the achievement of my life
    appears to be zero by zero.by this stanza you showed that how humble you are! ! !

    As a person you are a great man, very clever and Intelligent.
    and a nice human being, a citizen of the world!
    I miss to read this in dec 13th but happy to read this! ! !
    God bless you! ! ! ! !

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  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (12/18/2011 8:14:00 AM)

    just still being alive at your age is alone quite an achievement, , , , your poetry is known all over the world now, , , that too is another achievement...great write Ramesh...

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