Barry Van Allen


'23' - Poem by Barry Van Allen

It really won't be long until I'm older,
with every year that passes, I can see,
the life-times I have wasted,
although, I am only weeks from '23'.

I have seen another summer filled with laughter,
I am watching as the leaves fall from the trees,
as the winter closes in,
I watch the days grow dim,
while being only weeks from '23 '.

There is not much that I know of love,
though more than I have ever known,
'nor much of life or death, I guess,
... and as my years go flying past,
I fear that I won't grasp - - -
the meaning of my life by '23'.


Comments about '23' by Barry Van Allen

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Blake (6/6/2007 11:18:00 AM)

    i agree with Dee and Diane 'wow' lol great job! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Diane Violet (6/2/2007 6:01:00 PM)

    I'll second that 'wow'! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (5/30/2007 1:51:00 PM)

    Wow Barry! ! You were pretty deep...even at 23! ! ! Nicely done!
    Hugs,
    Dee (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 30, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, March 4, 2011


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