50 Years Imprisonment! Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

50 Years Imprisonment!

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50 years imprisonment!
Added to your present age;
There you will surely die,
For, there is no more hope at all for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 23 June 2015

This poem is relatable. I also grew up in the ghetto. Nice job!

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Melvina Germain 29 June 2015

Dark and dismall but so true for so many.....

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Sofia Kioroglou 15 October 2015

Love it! Short but pithy!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 September 2017

And do you know worlds leaders and best doctors and god fearing who topped the world were all like you deprivation only paves ones way UR THE BESTEST POET OF PH TODAY READ MY BESTEST UNIVERSAL POEM MY MOM'S SMILES I pray

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Julie Smith 29 September 2016

Good one, it feels like this is happening to me right now, hope it will turn out different...

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Gajanan Mishra 04 August 2016

life is full of hope and no despire

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Philo Yan 01 April 2016

Raw and painful truth of poverty. Thank you for sharing.

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Ernest Makuakua 15 January 2016

true kofi keep writing its inspiring to read your work

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