Tortured love in my heart, you tore it apart.
With the twist of a telephone wire,
you took away my utmost desire.
I cry for you through tear-filled eyes.
I long for your touch, I miss you oh so much.
Written: February 11/07
'Missing you', two very sad words. Eloquent write, Melvina. Kindest regards, Sandra
Another great poem that is sad and very well written! So much said in so few words...Great job Melly! Keep up the great work. ((Hug)) =Shelley=
Melvina, short, but as beautiful as ever. Great wordage as ever. Thanks for sharing it. David
Stark emotion; how you manage it poetically I don't knowm but you do. Torture is right.
Very revealing line...with a twist of a telephone wire... Awesome...next... Hugs, dee
And you put it all, oh so well, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short but mighty powerful write Melvina, , , , , , , , well done