RIC S. BASTASA

What do you think this poem is about?

♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫

Keep talking ﮮ
while i sing

♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫ ♫ ♪ ♫

My heart ♥

We bask under the sun


The two of us
ﻀ ﻀ

but not so close please




ﻀ ﻀ


Where there is still a space for me to smile


RIC S. BASTASA
Submitted: Wednesday, June 11, 2008
Edited: Thursday, June 12, 2008


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  • Jennifer Chalk (4/25/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    This made me smile! ! I just love the shapes. Cheers!

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  • Lillian Thomas (9/20/2009 12:40:00 AM)

    very nice! concise, let's me have room to think about it and let the poem echo inside, finding its meaning.

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