(a) 22 (Love/Passion) Weave Me Into You Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(a) 22 (Love/Passion) Weave Me Into You
Weave me into you
You, the warp and I, the weft
In between, no space left
If anyone tried to tear
Will fail, because we will share
A bond
So strong
With
An amalgation of our spirits
No you
No me
Only We
Only We
Beautiful Poem Tranquil, I really loved it. Take care, You are one talented poet.
This is a nice poem but the whole of itis undermined by the use of 'coz'. You poeticise well, throughout, but plant a slang word in the middle. The word 'because' seems to me to be quite a central word to this poem and it seems a shame to use a dumbed down expression. otherwise bI think it is quite a lovely piece.
Two souls bound so tightly together - wonderful imagery TO, love it. Justine
Praiseworthy! Golden thread of love warped by longing and the caterpillars weave a silk cloth.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Lovely poem TO - strong and inspirational, Steve