Here Are My Eyes Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Here Are My Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Here are my eyes
Drown them in yours...

Here are my lips
Eclipse them with yours...

Here is my skin
Dissolve it in yours...

Here is my heart
Unite it with yours...

Here are my dreams
Suffuse them with yours...

Here are my hopes
Fulfill them with yours...

Here are my thoughts
Enervate them with yours...

Here is my soul
Possess it with yours...

Here is my spirit
Elevate it with yours....

Here is my life
Fill it with yours....

Heres Me...
Yours, yours, yours....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anirbit Mukherjee 08 September 2006

Very passionate. But potentially sublime

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jack russell 10 September 2006

The soulful height of romanticism....loved it :) Jack.

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Duncan Wyllie 10 September 2006

And heres us thinking WHAT A GREAT PIECE THIS IS Thankyou Darling for sharing your wonderful words Love duncan X

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Salir Airosa 10 September 2006

Beautiful poem, you captured the heart and soul of love, and I think your readers too! :)

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Melvina Germain 10 September 2006

Here's love--an absolutely beautiful piece-I love it--Melvina

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2019

Grand write. Thoughts are evolving through profound ocean of wisdom and love. Go ahead.

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Tissa Calvert 26 August 2008

I love this poem and it is very beautiful keep up the work

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rajagopal haran 14 April 2008

unique style..vibrant words...well written

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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: Here Are My Eyes He felt some radiance, as he drowned her deer like eyes in his; He sensed her lustrous passion, when obscured her lips by his! He caressed the warmth of fleece; as her skin dissolved in his, He softened his robust heart, when it was time to reunite with hers! That was all a dream – unreal. What a dream, that was! ? ! He cherished his blemished dreams, as she saturates them in hers; He nurtured his failing hopes, to realize them together with hers! He sapped the going strength of his thoughts, to encourage hers; He awaited her soul to enlighten and affect her power over his! He brought his incensed soul to fore; to gratify her mounting soar He tormented a damned life and wished for a final hatred from her!

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Anirban Dasgupta 13 April 2007

Wow...ur a master in using the right words...keep it up...

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