(a) 23 (Love/Passion) Where's The Thief? Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 23 (Love/Passion) Where's The Thief?

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Last night I was out of myself....
Wandering, running, searching
From street to street
From river to river...
Panting, shivering, falling
My heart had been stolen
How could I go back without it?
Where was He?
The thief? !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 17 December 2006

Hey! Last night you were with him. Those were the ardor-lights in your eye! And the lights of the room were dim. You did not wander or run; but shy! You visualized the street of passion; And, you were in awe of his fashion! Whatever made you think it was stolen? Your heart to him; I saw - you had given!

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Joe Breunig 16 December 2006

A cute and clever write; enjoyed the title; nicely done.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 December 2006

A Very imaginative concept & delivery, here, T.O....A solid crafting of intruiging, succinct vering'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F j R

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