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A bait and I.

In the ocean of passion,
Reason has little liaison,
Fish abound, blink and twinkle,
Splash at the face to bloom and spring,
Constant chanting with airy bubbles,
Enter the nostrils to be pliable,
Softened hearts speak lovely words,
Wised brains teach unlearned thoughts,
Crucial becomes useless steam,
Life becomes a dream to dream,
I am going to fish in the ocean of passion,
Where I can find multitude dream,
To get the colored, I have to go deep,
While Big villains are on the top,
Mushroom fish are for the plates,
Garbage fish are not for sale,
Taken a fish for the supper the last,
My cute little fish is for the heart.
I am going earnestly for the fishing,
In the oceans of blue and nothing.

Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012


Comments about this poem (A bait and I. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi )

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  • Dwayne Gordon (1/30/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    Life becomes a dream to dream.....
    Brilliant work of art...

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  • Meera Panigrahi (9/9/2012 8:14:00 AM)

    I am going to fish in the ocean of passion..... Lovely line

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  • Karen Sinclair (8/22/2012 4:13:00 AM)

    The ratings on this piece as far as im concerned do not reflect how well this is written, it is so cleverly placed and perfectly put, you have a style which is very unique and i for one think it is marvellous and honest

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  • Roongratt Srimanchantha (7/19/2012 2:06:00 AM)

    Wow..very beautiful! !

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  • Johnathan Juarez (5/12/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    quirky and full of life. love it

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  • Dave Walker (4/16/2012 5:00:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, like it, a great write.

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