A Bewitchment Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

A Bewitchment

Rating: 5.0


depth of your eyes
attract me as the magnet
and I am drowning
in them
I am drowning
therefore you
in this way
don't look at me

your lips are full
of bizarre words
and sweet love words
it is object of dreams
not only my

you are saying,
that I have eyes
as two oceans
and you love me
affectionately
and you want
to be loved
you are

far

it is close

you can have

everything

...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dagmara Anna 29 July 2009

Delicate, sensitive and romantic.Shapely written. Very much I like it. :))

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i want my wife to tell me that.........

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 August 2009

Something that we need, a real authentic kind of love, like a kind of magic! Good piece indeed Maria.

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 31 January 2010

First half of the poem is superb but the last part something is missing.....Sorry, dont be angry.. U write nicely...in other poems.

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C. P. Sharma 03 January 2010

Bewitching words with captivating weave. CP

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Ken E Hall 11 December 2009

A bewitching poem love can be such a pull on the heart strings as to surrender+++++10 regards

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Rachel Butler 07 November 2009

'And you love me affectionately and you want to be loved ' Rachel Ann Butler

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 August 2009

i am drowning therefore you in this way don't look at me................ lave dazzles like rainbow by colors eyes raves up to the luscious glow moon bewitches ocean to wave still it hides in dark to hold tide, ...........wonderfully curved over rock of love bewitching the beholders, yetb ingenious through imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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