depth of your eyes
attract me as the magnet
and I am drowning
in them
I am drowning
therefore you
in this way
don't look at me
your lips are full
of bizarre words
and sweet love words
it is object of dreams
not only my
you are saying,
that I have eyes
as two oceans
and you love me
affectionately
and you want
to be loved
you are
far
it is close
you can have
everything
...
Something that we need, a real authentic kind of love, like a kind of magic! Good piece indeed Maria.
First half of the poem is superb but the last part something is missing.....Sorry, dont be angry.. U write nicely...in other poems.
A bewitching poem love can be such a pull on the heart strings as to surrender+++++10 regards
'And you love me affectionately and you want to be loved ' Rachel Ann Butler
i am drowning therefore you in this way don't look at me................ lave dazzles like rainbow by colors eyes raves up to the luscious glow moon bewitches ocean to wave still it hides in dark to hold tide, ...........wonderfully curved over rock of love bewitching the beholders, yetb ingenious through imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delicate, sensitive and romantic.Shapely written. Very much I like it. :))