Hari Smith Holms

Nice one, dear Nilakshi Das, a form of spirituality and the need for awareness of the left-behind traces or footprints.

spiritual and demanding.....the way is shown in no uncertain terms....the path to eternity, the path to nirvana....
prophetic and well written

liked it
cheers

What's the use of this life,
If innocence does fail?
Will we have fun and frolic,
With a body with empty shell? ...........
Beautiful verse :)

Spiritually vacant body, you mean to say, I think.

Our lives without footprints are miserable. Man's quest is to make impact. This tallies with my poem: I Want To Be A Life Line

It is still a shell precious when poetic exuberance and the emptiness can be nostalgic for ever.

A nice standard Let, fill us with pure light, sadly we are born pure and so many go off the beaten track but thanks to your kind that shout out for a crystal mind.thanks or this regards

I liked this, don`t understand the review from Romeo Vishal, who can`t be bothered to write decent English and seems to deduce a meaning from your poem that is not there...If you have some kind of problem, get it fixed - you
don`t have to try and sort it out here, I thought this site is about literature, not about social networks.....

this poem is so Becoming and yet Dulcet.......an amazing piece i must say
loved it
thank you for sharing it
love
payal

inner search for reality set with subtlety/fine to relish