I want to keep my head down,
To utter my prayer for us.
Let, fill us with pure light,
Let us be as sober as grass.
The open air, the crystal mind,
The leaves of grass, the dew
From the heaven, the azure sky,
All we need, to worship you!
What's the use of this life,
If innocence does fail?
Will we have fun and frolic,
With a body in empty shell?
We have come to leave footprints,
On the way we always walk.
So that people may follow us,
Our works and walk on our given track!
I liked this, don`t understand the review from Romeo Vishal, who can`t be bothered to write decent English and seems to deduce a meaning from your poem that is not there...If you have some kind of problem, get it fixed - you don`t have to try and sort it out here, I thought this site is about literature, not about social networks.....
A nice standard Let, fill us with pure light, sadly we are born pure and so many go off the beaten track but thanks to your kind that shout out for a crystal mind.thanks or this regards
Our lives without footprints are miserable. Man's quest is to make impact. This tallies with my poem: I Want To Be A Life Line
...our footprints are ways for others to trace back our sins and virtues.....great wrk dear, this poem was a nice one to read
Nice one, dear Nilakshi Das, a form of spirituality and the need for awareness of the left-behind traces or footprints.
spiritual and demanding.....the way is shown in no uncertain terms....the path to eternity, the path to nirvana.... prophetic and well written liked it cheers
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem is so Becoming and yet Dulcet.......an amazing piece i must say loved it thank you for sharing it love payal