Treasure Island

Veronica Musica

A boy and a girl, the best of friends.

**Not my poem, just an unnamed piece I found a couple years back**

A boy and a girl,
the best of friends.
From elementary to high school,
from beginning to end.

Through all those years,
their friendship grew.
They both felt the same,
but neither knew.

Each waking moment,
since the day they met,
They both loved each other,
sunrise to sunset.

He was all she had,
in her terrible life.
He was the one,
who kept her from her knife.

She was his angel,
she made him smile.
Though life threw him curves,
she made it all worth while.

Then one day,
things went terribly wrong.
The next few weeks
were like a very sad song.

He made her jealous,
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, 'Do you love her? '
on purpose he lied.

He played with jealousy,
like it was a game.
Little did he know,
things would never be the same.

His plan was working,
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.

One night she broke down,
feeling very alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.

She dialed his number,
he answered, 'Hello'
She told him she loved him,
and hung up the phone.

He raced to her house,
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.

Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.

As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
He grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.

She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her note
his handwriting said:

I loved her so,
she never knew.
All this time
I loved her too

Submitted: Saturday, November 08, 2008

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  • Cee Rain (9/2/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    Someone on wrote this, but i forgot this about 7 or 8 yrs ago and it still touches me. (Report) Reply

  • Tiana Webb (3/17/2012 7:14:00 PM)

    I love this poem so much. It sounds so close to what I'm feeling with my best guy friend who is in love with my best girl friend. I know how it feels but I would never try to kill myself over it. Saying that, I can still relate with the girl in this poem. It is so sad and emotional. I am glad I read it and I thank you very much for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • asma Jone (12/4/2008 7:53:00 PM)

    wow this is beautiful i juss love it and the ending was so sad makes an person cry they both died, reminds me of romeo and juliet, true love (Report) Reply

  • Lowly Dreamer (11/8/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    This is and absolutely amazing piece. It is very emotional. I thank you for sharing this. (Report) Reply

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